Sunrays disquiet your sweet slumber,
As you twist in bed, coiled in bedspread.
Your arms settle on my body
Perhaps, they were searching for me.
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I really enjoyed this poem. ''Touching'', it brought a smile to my face! ! Thank You!
gr8 poem...buddy! ! ! nice flow n yeah very romantic....luv ur style of writing....keep it up! ! ! !
whoa...amazing fantastic poem preets....really enjoyed the treats... keep it up! ! ! .....
Preets..... This is so very romantic.... your words are so full of power that they build the scene right in front.... This is a different you! Loved the smooth flow of words... absolutely romantic reflections!
Aww this is so sweet... I love waking up to moments in love :)
hey preets, this is quite different from what u usually write...i mean in terms of diction n style... i liked it though... love, Asma...
P.D., I've been waitin for someone like yourself to write out a fantasy I wish would come true. Thanx for sharing!