Monday, June 20, 2005
Early Morning, The Comments
Rating: ★2.8
morn
things burst
from within me
the ocean wave
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Raynette Eitel
20 June 2005
John, , of all the poems I've read by you, this one is my favorite. I especially like 'light inches itself into me...' a lovely thought. It is hard not to be trite when writing about dawn, but you have managed to be original. Nice work. Raynette
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9/12/2025 8:18:11 AM # 1.0.0
john, like the poem......................i think hes right its your best.