Awake children awake morning calls
With colours of shining paint the walls.
Do not be worried, do not sleep more
Come on and stand, walk do not be bore.
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We hear singing of early morning. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet. Sunrise is good.
Absolutely Breath Taking! ! ! My Heart was Instantly Taken! ! ! ! Thank You for such A Dedication to All! ! !
very nice writing. 1 Dec 2014 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Fay Slimm xA piece filled with the song of life to which not only children but all readers will respond with uplift of joy. Your students were fortunate to have such a spiritual master who brought them awareness of true values. A delightful read. 2 Dec 2014 by Fay Slimm | Reply Note: These review comments are received via poetfreak (PF)
Holy moment it is morning sings song, We have to walk all together far long. Along with time let's run to reach far Sun is suppose to rise now hiding star. nature and sprituality. you are taking us through the beauty of the morning into the world of the divine. thank u dear Kumaramani. tony