Sunday, September 27, 2015

Early Morning Of 28th September,2015 Comments

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As usual I arose in the early morning,
and went to the roof of my house,
I saw the beautiful moon on the eastern skies,
it was looking more beautiful,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 29 September 2015

A lovely poem Akhtar ji! It has the beauty of the Moon and the sheen of Venus! Along with you, I soared on the wings of imagination! Top marks! Doom's day is sure, but none can predict it!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 September 2015

Man's imagination is controlled by the variables which are not verified. the beginning of the poem is like the pleasant river, in which I am made to travel in a imaginary boat..Thank you for sharing! !

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Khalida Bano Ali 28 September 2015

An amazing and wonderful write................................10

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Kelly Kurt 28 September 2015

A marvelously written poem, Akhtar. I do not usually get up early, but I stay up late and just tonight watched the eclipse. The moon was so beautiful that I cried. The heavens know when time will end, men do not know the day or time

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 September 2015

Arising in early morning speaks many things of fresh mind in fresh environment. Feeling, beauty, peace, love and life of morning time is definitely very special. Such freshness makes our definite. Very wise and nice poem shared...10

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