Sunday, September 27, 2015

Early Morning Comments

Rating: 5.0

From the hills of the east
the sun unmasked the dusk
Through the window the tree stood still
waiting for the wind
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Tony Adah
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Adolphus Moses 04 October 2016

A mortar sings by the instructions of the pestle The world is reborn for fresh activities and a cutlass laughed on the whetstone I LOVE IT.

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Bharati Nayak 07 October 2015

Today the world is reborn Again into toils When man rest no more Looking for what to fill a void In his stomach- - Stunning beautiful write depicting the daily struggle of man that starts every morning with the rising of sun.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 28 September 2015

Verily, the morning brings a new day into our life, calling us towards the fulfillment of our needs and performance of our duties........10

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Liza Sudina 27 September 2015

toil, toil - it is for our sins Bible says. real poem! my mom is Microbiolog too.

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