Monday, April 14, 2008

Early Morning Comments

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As I wandered through a wood I stopped to take a look
The only sound was animals at play
And off in the distance the babbling of a brook
How I longed to stay
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Jim Milks
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George Sicillia 14 April 2008

Lovely poem... how i also longed for the sounds of nature but when i wake up, all to do lists is waiting to deal with. Hhhh..

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Melissa Coventry 14 April 2008

Wonderful poem and beautiful topic of the tranquility of nature being pushed away for work.. and portaying it as an invader which it is to the most simply beautiful things in life we should be grateful to still have. It reminds me of the days I would walk to school through Australian woodscrub.. that now is all house development. So thankyou for reminding me... Take care, Mel xxx

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