On the roof, outside the window
are glare crusted humpbacked whales,
carved by the unforgiving wind of early March
as it pushed through the last breaths
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Fantastic metaphors employed here. Congratulations on having this poem selected as poem of the day. You might enjoy my poem with a similar theme, called ROOFTOP STRONGHOLD. Thanks for sharing.
Environment is good this early March, nature blooms of which man should enjoy not ruin! High mark.
Bursting with a beauty that is so natural and nice! Congrats!