Early love was fresh and new
It carried dreams in eyes
And faith in smile
Rosy, smooth and bright
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The poet has beautifully expressed the delicate feelings associated with teenage love. But the dream did not last long and the things come to a pass where they have turned sour subsequently. This is a wonderful poem by all means. Thank you Nosheen.
A creative and compelling composition that is wonderfully worded!
Nausheen, I think love is never faded away. With the changing time it reacts in a different style. When we were two my wife's love was entirely for me. With the passage of time it was shared by my children and grand children. Think on the word My even if she loves my grandchildren more than me, my ego is satisfied because I exist in my children and grandchildren. You have nicely described the pains of changes that you felt with the moving time. It's a lovely poem.
A touching depiction has been inscribed on early love astutely. Highly imaginative. Beautiful poem shared. Thank u dear Nosheen for sharing this lovely poem.