Spoke filled rays auriferous spun through
filigree o' verdant canopy
Hold my promise
Shed my fears
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i've read it. i thank you for sharing. i've read the comments, all aglow. but, unfortunately it doesn't click with me. however i did like the sound of: Touch falling And let me know That you will glow Upon spilled years Now sprawling: ...........i'm a sucker for sweet rhymes. bri :)
The soft sun rays filtering through the canopy of leaves, early in the morning forming a filigree is beautifully captured in arresting verse! Enjoyed the poem much! !
This poem took my breathe away, imagining the tree and early light loving each other! If I who watched the sunrise only a few times being inlove with the light coming from behind the trees, how could those who see it everyday not be inlove with the first light of our sun? Your poem, memory to keep for a life time.
Must have been a beautiful photo Danny to inspire you to write such a lovely poem. Well done.
Something about the way you craft the illumination of nature's delicate beauty stirs my soul. Such sweet surrender in the sunrise. Absolutely magnificent. PEACE
well crafted versus, that definitely tickle my envy for your semantic enchantment. I love a good nature poem especially one that is bucolic like this. Stellar stuff Whisper love on each days breath And each day be reborn. nuff said