Saturday, May 29, 2010

(((Early Eve Of Remember))) ! Comments

Rating: 3.2

It t'was in the early eve of Remember- -
Before twilight had come around...
Where i found you with a basket of love so true...
And in the air t'was a melody of new loves sweet sound! ;
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Theodora (Theo) Onken
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Theodora Onken 05 May 2016

A friend of mine said she tried to leave a comment here and she got that i was not taking any comments- this IS NOT TRUE! ! ! ! Someone has really messed this site up. i have to fight just to read other peoples poetry. Believe this site needs a huge overhaul.

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Roseann Shawiak 19 October 2013

Beautiful depiction of sharing love under the stars. Reminded me of one of my own memories, long ago. Thank you for sharing and bringing back my memory as well. RoseAnn

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Patricia Grantham 04 September 2013

A very beautiful and passionate write. A starry night is a most magnificent sight made even more lovelier when two lovers meet together and bask in each other under the stars. Enjoyed this one.

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