Early Death Or Meditation Comments

Very brautiful. Was meant to say beautiful but will leave that freudian slip...! Is there a touch of brautigan here? Certainly for the beauty that haunts the words and the fab title that drew me in. Love it. HG: -) xx

I do like this Wojja, use of words again show you as a talented, humane and thoughtful writer. Well done

A choice between an early death and meditation? ? ? Two very different things, but tied down by us mortals...Quite likely, meditation is getting killed to death..! ! Keep meditating, though, Wojja. And ye have the chance to become immortal (well, atleast in the our minds) . Hail, Sir Wojja! Cheers. Subroto

A different and appealing work friend 10

'Should you die before your death Peace is born on every breath' nice words---good write -10 anjali

Lovely first lines.Your rhymes add music to the form.10.for you. Kind regards, Sandra

When ego dies before it's body's death..........Peace is born in every breath.......Great Write....10+++

stylish and eloquentwritten. But hey, you already know that Steve

Love the poem 10+++ Keep writing............