Early Dawning Comments
Wend your way down to a euphonious flowing river,
With rippling water slowly trickling by,
Gaze up and view the branches of leaves that quiver,
As the winds that softly waft them, sough and sigh.
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There is a rich and vibrant flow and texture to this finely woven piece I love these two simple lines as I feel that they capture something about the whole theme 'An otter lifts her whiskery nose to the morning, And sniffs the energizing crisp fresh air, ' Beautiful Ernestine Many thanks Love duncan X
I love the way you put this peice together Ernestine.... lovely
ernestine...that was refreshing...my first poem read and it filled me with calmness and peace...thank you...i too love nature soooo much....love...nalini
You my dear are most definitely vieing as a strong cotender for Masteress of Imagery...a NATURE-al fit for you, young lady'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR
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You have included so much of nature's beauty here and woven it into a beautiful tapestry. Andrew x