Friday, September 21, 2007

Early Date Comments

Rating: 4.3

She rises bright as sunrise floods
Her Grandma's garden tangle
To meet her friends out near the walk
Where fuschia blossoms dangle.
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Goldy Locks 21 September 2007

cute - fluid; not heavy on the rhymes to weigh down your verse. keep on, sjg

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