Monday, March 21, 2016

Early Cascade Comments

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I couldn't have waited. By the time you return
it would have rotted on the vine.
So I cut the first tomato into eighths,
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Lucia Perillo
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Syeda Rabeya 30 October 2020

Wonderful poem indeed Grateful thoughts come from inner. Love it..

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 03 May 2016

I couldn't have waited. By the time you return it would have rotted on the vine. So I cut the first tomato into eighths, salted the pieces in the dusk and found the flesh not mealy (like last year's) or bitter, even when I swallowed the green crown of the stem that made my throat feel dusty and warm. Beautiful and praise worthy dear poetess Thanks for sharing.

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