Eaglewise Comments

Yes Juneil...what would it be like to soar with eagles... a splendid topic well done...Alf

Young man you have your talent shinning...your words were a bit strong animated having a nice end rhymes...THanks

I love your words and the way you express yourself it shows the type of person you are inside when you can show that you won't give up! 9/10 brilliant you have really taught me that words are the most dramatic and important part of a fantastic poem! ! !

great poem..nicely written/rhymes....

amazing incredible..............i can learn more from you

i think your poem is beautiful

Dear Juneit, Thanks for a good rhythmical poem with a definite objective. When you write. 'I will fly for my starry dreams not for the kudos for my name' we know the detachment you are trying to reach. IN the Geeta, Hindu Religious book, Lord Krishna says to Arjuna, ' KARMANYE BADHIKARASTE MA PHALLESHU KADACHANA' meaning you have got a right to duties not to its results. This detachment is needed to attain the higher level. A 10 from my side for theme, vocabulary and rhythmic expression. Rajkumar

Very inspirational and imaginative poem Juneil....great rhyming

Great job. Keep going.

It was a very well written piece and I enjoyed it. Inspirational sort of.

very optimistic.good

very splendid write.....

I love it great job its very....it describes how I feel at times