Friday, July 15, 2011

Eagle & Snake Comments

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You're down on the ground. The biting gets bad.
You feel you don't really belong.
Why is it - you wonder - the world is so mad
And everything seems to go wrong?
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Paul Abucean
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Chinedu Dike 14 February 2015

A lovely poem, well articulated and penned with insight in poetic diction. The rhyme scheme is beautiful. I concur with the poet's conviction that, AN EAGLE'S PERSPECTIVE IS NOT LIKE A SNAKE'S. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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