Thursday, March 27, 2014

Eagle On Wings Comments

Rating: 4.9

Have you watched an eagle in flight?
On wings flayed, it looks a massive kite
It shoots into the heights with unlabored ease
Enjoying the kiss of passing breeze
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Valsa George
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bri edwards 08 August 2021

I Googled: some of these may not SOAR, but they surely get up HIGH: 'Top 10 Highest Flying Birds In The World - The Mysterious... Search domain themysteriousworld.com //themysteriousworld.com/10-highest-flying-birds-in-the-world/' BRI : )

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bri edwards 08 August 2021

commendable: the bird and the poet ;) (cont)

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Bri Edwards 08 August 2021

(cont.) as in '3: to open or spread outward the pants flare at the bottom', a definition from Google dictionary source. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 08 August 2021

I'm sure your use of the word 'flayed' is incorrect in line 2. Perhaps you meant 'flared'? ? ? ? bri ;)

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Suresh Kumar Ek 27 November 2020

The bird of grace Gracefully portrayed

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 June 2020

On March 27th,2014 completion of three hundred poems is definitely a great milestone for you. The title of the poem is well chosen. Eagle is a symbol of strength and freedom and is the national bird of the United States. We humans have a lot to emulate from this bird, In concluding stanza you have rightly said....Let us soar like an eagle on wings. A brilliant poem is amazingly shared.10

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Kesav Easwaran 08 February 2020

A poem that sings the glory of the mightiest bird. Gives out an inspiring message in the end. Thirty six well written lines on a simple theme. Not an easy job. It calls for top imaginary skill and vocabulary. Congrats Valsa. You have already soared high...10+

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A B Faniki 05 September 2019

A beautiful pucture u have painted with words that fit perfectly.Thanks 4 shaing such a great write

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Prabir Gayen 31 July 2019

Let us soar like an eagle on wings And shoot into the sky in spiral rings Propelling forward to still greater heights As this dweller of the sky in never failing spirits! Very beautiful poem...with deep observation

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Jane Campion 06 July 2019

Nature's flight in the form of an eagle soars. As does this beautiful poem.

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Bri Edwards 11 April 2019

i saw one of these in NC this year. we had a fish fry together. bri :) i KNOW i left a comment earlier.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 March 2019

Liked the final stanza. Powerful and very inspiring lines that fuel us to soar and claim our own sky. Superbly penned.

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Valsa George 08 March 2019

Thanks a lot Rose Marie for your delightful comment! I value your words a lot! Yes, this is one of my favorite poems! The avian king has a rare grace, indeed!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 March 2019

The opening line of this wonderful poem drew me to read the whole write. The rest of the work has been paved with superb imagery and beautiful verses. A vivid depiction of the wonderful attributes.of the magnificent Eagle and labeled.as the Avian King.

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Prabir Gayen 05 February 2019

I must quote... With sharp talons and a curved beak And strength enough to subdue the meek It swoops down over the ones that cower And preys upon what it wants to devour Thanks

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Prabir Gayen 17 January 2019

Very beautiful poem strong imagery.....thanks

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I chose this poem to read as it's caption struck me and to my delight and satisfaction it, certainly, caters enough Thank you Valsa, thank you

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 August 2018

Your 300th poem in PH is a great poem! My pleasure reading it time and again!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 July 2018

Let us soar like an eagle on wings/And shoot into the sky in spiral rings.....Absolutely brilliant! My great pleasure reading it time and again dear madam!

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Robert Murray Smith 07 June 2018

Valsa, a wonderful poem that soars with the eagle. I have read no better.+++10 Ribert

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alan brown 13 April 2018

A very descriptive poem of a beautiful bird in flight, no bird is greater than the Eagle Valsa, enjoyed your poem thank you Alan

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