Friday, April 21, 2017

Eagle Comments

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Away from the eyrie you ferry
winging without string
across nun-like clouds
up to the mystical blue sky
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Luz Hanaii 15 March 2020

Very beautiful work dear Yoonoos. To fly upon the wings of an eagle is such a beautiful desire, very nice flow and message expressed here. tfs

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Elizabeth Mpanga 27 September 2019

If I read this poem, a year ago... I would not have understood it. After experiencing the pain of loss... I fully understand what's in these words. Its like a mix of emotions, hard to explain yet you feel it and its very important too. This is very familiar to me now. Thank you so much Yoonoos. Simple but deep poem.

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Anjandev Roy 09 September 2019

in the close human woods my God, I seek..........unique. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Great write. Colourful thoughts on the journey under the wings of faith touching everything with hues of heaven....Thank you dear poet friend

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

you could fold me in your wing of faith touching every thing with hues of heaven but in vain in the close human woods my God, I seek... Fantastic...poet awesome..

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Christina Chin 05 December 2018

Lovely poem! Have a great day!

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Michael Hopkins 05 December 2018

A lovely & wisdom filled poem. Love your images you paint with your pen. You are truly a gifted poet Sir.

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Gary James Smith 04 December 2018

Thanks for your poem.. cyclone...it was an interesting read indeed...have a wonderful day!

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M Asim Nehal 20 November 2018

Fantastic poem, You left me speechless and I quote: I wish if only now you could fold me in your wing of faith touching every thing with hues of heaven but in vain in the close human woods my God, I seek

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Captain Cur 25 July 2018

A sweeping and majestic write of our hopes, fears and mortality. Beautifully structured.

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Laquory Jones 10 June 2018

Awesome write, Very Deep and Interesting. Thanks for sharing, Keep up the great work

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Akhtar Jawad 08 June 2018

Truths of life I know and experience it, truths of death and after death is my imagination and I shall experience it, but what was the truth before this life, I wish I would have brought a few memories of life before this life, if any.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 April 2018

Its own eminence! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 10 June 2017

in this poem also [i've a previous comment, below], there is a period, followed by no space. i think you DO want a period.....with a nice space following it. WHAT IS THE TRUTH ONE IS BORN WITH? ? ? ? **** that i want to read about in a clear poem. **** i see YOU have properly place the with where it 'belongs', not at the end of a sentence (as i put it) ! ! you wrote: ....but truth with which you are born... bri :)

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Bri Edwards 09 May 2017

of course dying CAN be difficult. ask the person who had an elephant step on his/her chest ever-so-gently and THEN increase the downward pressure ever so slooowwly over a period of an hour until breathing ceases to be possible for the 'victim'! but, in another sense, dying IS easy compared to facing certain realities of living. that's one reason i wouldn't mind dying. BUT not by an elephant, though it WOULD be interesting! bri :) to MyPoemList

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Queeny Gona 05 May 2017

To die is easy, difficulty lies in living up .truth never costs as much as it is worth Very intellectual read and seems to be a poem out of practical experience. Each line is a extract of philosophical bent of mind sir! Thanks for the share!

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The true experience in life unfolded in the poem.A nice poem, Thanks for sharing.

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Prayad Brian Pantasri 02 May 2017

Indeed, life is so precious and we take serious of living. However, death is just another thing that bring heart and soul to meet the truth! Wonderful poem sir, thank you for sharing.

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Wonderful poem comes from the heart and touches the heart yoonoos Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 28 April 2017

It is true that 'to die is easy, difficulty lies in living up not to the badly told truth'. I like this poem and its rhymes too.

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