Each One Her Own… And Hers To Keep Comments

Sweet indeed Rgds Nooruddeen

A thoughtful composition, well penned!

Good write 10s...........................................................

beautifully penned thanks for sharing

A thoughtful poem you have penned, nice to read.

Our sorrows and pains are the signs of an ailing Earth, come what may, the strive for a better life still sits on the core of better environment and health.Very interesting theme my dear Navrilith.

ooo, this is alsoa nother sweet poem thanks for sharing Luwi

So that she might swaddle them, and comfort them in her presence. That one so mighty could have fallen to their knees. Each one her own and hers to keep. And it was as if she knew then that I understood, So as I smiled that weak, watery smile, The sun rose over that heath, And life continued. hmm metaphor and what a pictographic feelings you collected in this poem, when I read it i was feeling like I am looking through window and out side its gray weather and clouds are there, and tearing in raining way and sound of thunder and lights make me feel like I am listening a music and the lights of sky remind me my past.. wonderful and really a sweet poem..loved it very much... well done firend 10/10

nice poem, lovely to read