Sunday, November 16, 2008

Each Heartbeat Comments

Rating: 4.4

The heartbeat
of another night
waiting for you
skips,
...
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Viola Grey
COMMENTS
The Dreamer 19 July 2009

the cheeky wink of every star reminds me of you. Cute Love it - very good 10++++

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Shimon Weinroth 19 November 2008

illusion, delusion and then falling on the thorns of reality, I kid you not, this is a good poem 10 cheers Shimon

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*Trusting You* 16 November 2008

Who am I kidding here, who am I lost within as deeply without I am walking the night alone. great job. the Saint is right this is really good. I like it a lot. *Purkey Girl*

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Saint Cynosure 16 November 2008

Super V this is so good it is a 10x10...

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Kris Smith 16 November 2008

Viola your heart will never die it only moves from your body to your pen at times 10 Chris

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