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Do not become tool
You shall look fool first
As people shall cut jokes
And offer sarcastic strokes
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Hasmukh Sir, Thank you for sharing the poem. The advice suggested is helpful and worth taking a note. Somewhere down you have used the word concern, which I think, in the context, means worry. Often I feel that your poems would be much easier to understand with a little bit of re-work on the language part, but then it is the choice of the writer readers should respect. Please keep posting. Regards, Supratik Sen, Hyderabad Apr 03,2015
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I love this poem of advice. P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala Apr 3,2015