Each day I watch the rising sun
Each night, the glowing moon
All time lays heavy on my mind
For you are gone too soon, too soon,
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But yet I cling to memories I shall not let you go. Deep feelings expressed in melodious lines.
When you live with such loving memories pain and agony become part of your life. While reading your poem I was reminded of a beautiful Urdu couplet by my poet friend, which would translate as 'In the beginning pain of separation was unbearable; Gradually it has become my companion in life. Lovely poem, Val.
So soulfully you have written the loss of love & the pain you feel, Valerie - it touched my heart. Only I can say true love is immortal, it will never go. You may read my poem (To meet my love)
So very touching and beautiful. Wish we could take the pain away but it is always there by the love in our hearts. Thank you for sharing these heart felt expressions of love and loss.
You loved him, very, very much, And that will always be, Of Life the melody, the touch, You're fondest memory, You're sentiments, Bloom here once more, With such sincerity.! Your tears converted into words, Remarkable, Beauty!
a beautiful poem, wonderfully expressed, powerful poem about true love
Amazing Valerie, , the title, it is moving just reading that, the words, the honesty of pain. Absolutely beautiful, Thank you and keep smiling. x ps Heard a beautiful write from Dee telling us about your birthday. Hope your day was special.
True love, so beautifully expressed with such deep emotions that jump from the page with such honesty!
... a beautuful poem on love thats true... he shall always be with you in your heart.. wonderful write...
An intense and passionate musing on the abrupt and unexpected departure of the loved one! He must be watching you from the heights and praying for you! ! Quite moving! !
Your name will rest upon my lips For all my lifelong days And I will hold your pictured face As in your eyes I gaze, I gaze, I like these lines very much
Your poem is beautifully honest and touching. Is there perhaps a beauty in sadness not found anywhere else? Not that we would ever wish to know this sadness but when it comes, perhaps it helps to feel it while remembering the one we lost - as you have done so well.