Expedition Comments

Life is likened to an adventurous quest in your enjoyable poem. Its enthusiasm is catching.

I enjoyed the use of the word expedition- -we should live our daily lives with the attitude of an expedition into unexplored realms! ! ! Excellent!

You have been living the life with undying hope and in peace. You have an positive attitude towards living this life. You are blessed. 'Enjoying cruise in the life ocean, Amassing veteran jewels as companions, Taking life in it's stride cheerfully, Let meaningful be this Expedition.'... is so nice. Loved this. Thanks for sharing.

Part - 2 Thanks for sharing this gem with us. Full vote.

It is a brilliant poem based on metaphor on occasion of your birthday. The beginning lines are most touching that I like to cite here....Riding on wishes of dear ones, / Gliding through imaginations, / In company of P.H. fraternity, I have touched the age of seventy. So fantastic. May God bless you abundantly. May the next life after seventy be cheerful ever.

An inspiring write, sir Ratnakar...10+++

Expedition with PH poets has been wonderful experience over the years. You have expressed it well. Thank you.

Let meaningful be this Expedition........lovely representation.Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

It will definitely be meaningful and cheerful......thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

Wish you happy birthday sir, Also I wish you to continue the poem, Awaiting for your blessing s

Happy Belated Birthday, Ratnakar. I didn't know! It sounds as though your fellow poets on PH are among your favourite gifts and presents! : -)

The time 69 gone away with the moonless night silently sway the propitious time 70 let the sun rise cheerfully Happy Birthday O Seventy............////////

Exciting that somebody is professing about the wonderful things about growing older.

A wonderful poem in celebration of a beautiful, meaningful and contended life. May you continue to enjoy your cruise in the life.ocean. Beautifully written. Happy birthday!

Gliding through imaginations. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.