Sunday, April 9, 2006

E-Tale Comments

Rating: 5.0

Older brother Sam unloaded rabbits from the hunt
A bigger rabbit than usual lay there
Little brother Ken asked why it was so big
Sam had a story to tell about the hare.
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Kesav Easwaran 08 January 2009

a good narration, Connie...funny amusing and interesting to read...more than these, this write gives a beautiful message...how can one 'shoot down' the warmth and friendlinness and affection, Easter brings in every year? good piece...i liked...10

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Barry Van Allen 29 March 2007

Connie, Sorry, but, Sam sounds like a meanie! Well, at least Ken and you and I know, who really wrote the letter. B.V.A.

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Ruby Root 16 July 2006

Hi Connie, This was a really cute story. Very creative, fun. It was really enjoyable to read. Take care.

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David Darbyshire 20 April 2006

Con nie Ahh nice poem, nice read, funny and sweet, loved it dave xxxx But they shoot raindeer? : (

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