Monday, December 31, 2012

'E# Of My Heart' Comments

Rating: 4.9

A song in your sacred veins...
Lyrics in your sapphire eyes...
Tune in your windy hairs...
Beat in your tiny heart...
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COMMENTS
Lucinda Nightsilver 18 November 2013

it's beautiful but sad.... very good

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Kishor Pathak 04 January 2013

Written from core...Nice composition could have been better with rhymes...

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Luscious Larry 03 January 2013

There is no E#. It's called F. I see the guitar so this must be intended. The person means nothing to you then? Or you mean nothing to her/him? Interesting!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 02 January 2013

Nice dedication to your special -some one.! The flow of the poem is musical.Hope that someone enjoyed it.

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Sossi Khachadourian 01 January 2013

I liked it, very well done!

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Vijay Sai R 31 December 2012

very nice to read all throughout

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Payal Parande 31 December 2012

how lovely....a special poem for some one special and pretty sure you made that person feel special...beautiful job sir

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Utsav Patel

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