Monday, June 25, 2007

E-Lover (C) 6-25-07 Comments

Rating: 4.3

We spend so much time together even though I've never seen you in life
We talk to each other day and night but not by phone it's by type
We've seen each other before but we're always standing still
People hate me because I love you so; some don't even think you're real
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Zahir Kijani
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Darlene Styles 17 April 2010

I can relate too. I love it <3 :))

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Crazy Vampire 24 March 2010

i love this poem! i totally can relate! keep up the good work!

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Meghan Foubare 09 June 2009

LOVE IT! you should write more about this subject.

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Shelby Walters 29 April 2009

Amazing! Do you write from the heart or was that just your imagination?

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Willow Herber 17 April 2009

WOW! it such a wonderful poem.. good jod.. keep it up :)

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Pocky Varela 10 April 2009

The way you have intwined your heart into words is simply stupendous! keep up the goodwork! : D

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Chitra - 09 April 2009

wow what a surreal journey through the wired world...thanks for introducing us to your cyber wife..hope you meet her soon in the real world

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Myrtle Thomas 08 April 2009

This is such a touching poem. I hope you get to meet this e lover A 10

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Joscelyn Alderdice 31 March 2009

This is a really sweet poem. Beautiful work!

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Gordon Wilkinson 26 February 2009

this was excellent so deserved a 10

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M A 26 February 2009

been there. i would love to hear the story behind this one, if time permits? ;)

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Tyease Collins 22 February 2009

OMG this poem is sooooooooo nice. I've definately been there before. I understand that people think it's a waste of time loving someone that's online but it can happen. As strong as a love is it shouldn't matter how far apart you are from that other person when their heart is right there in your hands =] -Tyease

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Luna Conley 21 February 2009

How sweet, I really enjoyed the last lines. Computer Wife was very cleaver. Nice job.

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T S 21 February 2009

I can so relate to this Corey you have an amazing talent with words

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Suad Alajmi 01 August 2007

hi, i really love it... i can say it to many friends: D thanks

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i know someone who is like that to a girl on poemhunter! wow. Sun ♥

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Thomas Le Guilcher 09 July 2007

i got a girl like that have you sent this poem to her yet

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~crazy/beautiful~ 27 June 2007

LOL COREY I LUVED IT! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Marvin Brato 25 June 2007

good write Corey, it is imaginative and well expressed. Write more.

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

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