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this poem has so many different images...in the first few verses i thought rain, and a white house/sheets....then sun, grass, darkness again...fall/winter and summer....very beautiful...you are an excellent poet 10/10

A beautiful poem with a world of emotion...nice

Hello Rema, You touched my heart with this beautiful poem, I have been in this place a thousand times. 10! from me... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves to Sing

Great poem, great poet..my ten claps

I say, It is really a poem. But I compose on water sheet with a miracle pen.Waves erase it every seconds. Rema its a great job.

You present your thoughts clearly in well written poetic proseand strike a resounding chord with me. To know oneself and accept that you are whatyou are no more and no less is the beginning of wisdom I enjoyed your writing ivor

....a 10 has been clicked for this thoughtful expressions.

We are all trying to find out the elusive mysteries of life and to where we shall go. It all seems so mystic and surreal. Yet, we love to dwell on this subject as it gives us enigmatic thinking prowess and feel. Thanks for sharing what you have done. Arya.

This poem is really very nice which describes emotions and the way they seem blank in ones life.

whoa...very lyrical, i agree with helen...beautiful colors woven through this...as always, your one of my favorites.10/10

Beautiful, lyrical picture painted with much introspection and emotion. Loved it. HG: -) xx

i felt myself to be with you here, , the lines reflect nature and inner enigma with ellusive words, , , the emptiness in the end, , i like it...

tears from the eyes the dappled flowers of dream the very secret of fear and the passing crowd these are all wonders of imagery flow across the plexus of life and living, yet ingenious resolving to a rune by the superb metaphores, wonderfully wrought over the white plain, the very voices over the black board in time and space, well penned,10+, thanks for sharing

Elusive... now let me see.. is that anything close to enigmatic? ? ? ? ? You have not surpressed much in this one... tis a good Right on the sheets you've written ... aroha

pain, grief, isolation, emptiness- Rema you have painted very vivid images with your words. i couldn; t agree more

really nice images i loved them

great poem with equally great words..u are really good...thanks for sharing..truly deserves a perfect *10*...

Thanks Rema, its really a good piece. a poetic colour and brush.

Secret of whispers not to fear beacuase they provide life's fervor..........good one from heart

Dear Remaji A poem with a lot of imagination.When in search of elesive self senses realises beuaty of nature and that leads you to your real nature. That is oneness with purity of love. Love and bliss in ones nature that is also your self. Good poems with great scope for thoughts. Greetings Satheesan rangorath