(e) 6 (Dark) Inside My Love, Die! ! Comments

With so much happening in this poem, it worth dying this death. Excellent narration of burining in love before the naughty and real death.

I would love to know the poet's mind while writing this one.... this is hauntingly beautiful!

It's so not YOU! It's like you're exploring new styles with each poem, a true mark of a poet! abstraction at its best! Preets

Fasanating piece, well done!

A nice slice of the abstract side from our resident OCEAN....i like this very much....ias i myself delve heavilyinto contemporary abstract verse...The mystery & surreal mystique that abounds this piece is inventive and mind-aural...A fINE PENNING ONCE AGAIN, MY GOOD FRIEND, T. O.! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''frank/fjr

Wow......this is a real sizzler of a poem....and well skripted if I do say...... well done TO............................