(e) 3 (Dark) The Dark Night Comments

This sounds familiar :) its one of my fav. I love the mystery, the fear you've captured in this one. Preets

An outstanding write Tranquil. Only in the dark night you may see the white shadows?

From the whoosh to the wails; the ghosts are wary of those rails that surround and protect this ode shaman lay on its back, as the dark horse rode! .......................................T.O..... keep them coming; we are all loving this erie atmosphere here..... I can see that in the comments you are getting! I really wish you get them published.

you hv effectively created a dark atmosphere....using gory images... an excellent poem... asma...

It is really very Dark. Shaman: is he healing the night, to tranform it in to dawn (a ray of reality) ?

Slendid piece, outstanding!

Its a creepy poem.Good use of words tho.Wonder wht was on ur mind when you wrote this. Ashish.