(e) 2 (Dark) The Abyss Beckons Comments

Awesome piece to start the week T.O. well done!

A W E S O M E...TIS ALL FROM THE TITLE TO THE FINAL.......................CALL T.O.>>>>MISTER MOJO.......--===='''''''''''*******RISING WOULD SAY'WEEEEL, ALL-RRRRIGHT, NOW! FJR..............................

i like this one...it produces a connection to the reader.

hmm...the abyss does beckon! ! ...reading this poem even more so! ! ! ! :) Asma...

Now THIS is what I like to read on a Monday morning... licence to go forth and LIVE! ! ! ! Full of abandon, this liberating piece from your stylish pen. t x