Sunday, January 14, 2007

(e) 13 (Dark) This Is The End Comments

Rating: 3.4

As the girdle of time
digs sharply into my flesh

As the black veil of my existence
...
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Asma Bahrainwala 15 January 2007

amazing images here... i esp liked this one- 'As the vulture of pervading questions/ devour my almost dead body' Asma...

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Geoff Warden 14 January 2007

This is indeed a deep set poem, , , , , , , , , and I enjoyed, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , well done,

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 January 2007

AWESOME WORK....The Darkside of T.O.....my, my, ....im likin' it, oh yes! You; re too young, but your verse takes me back to 1967 and Jim Morrison of the Doors....Had A song called 'The End'...it too was awesome....One of my favourite listens, still to this day.....As you are one of my favourite Reads.... fjr

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Linda Ori 14 January 2007

Never say never, TO. Interesting piece. I feel your frustration, but it is only fleeting - trust me. Maybe the end is only the beginning? Linda

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Ernestine Northover 14 January 2007

I do hope not TO, we would miss you too much. Interesting write, some very deep feelings in this one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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