Kept in the tense suspense of things,
He thought of other confused beings;
Like the sad butterfly whose cute wings
Fail mid-air in her sweet circling swings.
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You've masterfully filled a sad subject with so much information set in poetic terms that the poem becomes quite enjoyable just for the mental engagement. Good intricate poem. I especially like your perception of a butterfly's flight as 'swings.'
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You've masterfully filled a sad subject with so much information set in poetic terms that the poem becomes quite enjoyable just for the mental engagement. Good intricate poem. I especially like your perception of a butterfly's flight as 'swings.'