Dynasty Of Arrogance Comments

This poem is a great one. Marvelous!

A concise and poignant verse nicely brought forth with artistic brilliance. An insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Rahman.

Imaginative and poetic.

nice It is dark outside and flooding insane. The high ambition is down to the knee And a dynasty of arrogance is diminished like a straw going down the stream. great...10+++

Lovely creation. I love this poem. So, I read it more & more. Be well always my dear poet Rahman Henry. Also Thanks to Poet Razia Sultana for the translation.

your presentation is excellent

Greate imagery. Thanks to Razia Sultan for the translation.

Verily, staying awake consciously and unconsciously is the sign of progress

খুবই সাবলিল অনুবাদ করেছেন, রাজিয়া সুলতানা।

'I want to stay awake with you! '

It is dark outside and flooding insane. The high ambition is down to the knee And a dynasty of arrogance is diminished like a straw going down the stream.

wonderfully translated from original.....

I want to stay awake with you!

I always return to this poem; there is something beyond the written text, , , , ,

Thanks to all of you, thereaders who loved the translation of Rahman Henry's poem by me. It's a pleasure to read all the comments. Thanks for your time and interest.

I like to translate Rahman Henry 's poems because they have a natural flow, they are easy to understand and the word choices, organization and construction of the poems are worthy of making.............. The messages are also clear. I am Razia Sultana - it's my maiden name.

Excellent translation by Razia Sultana....

And a dynasty of arrogance is diminished like a straw going down the stream.

Stunning use of imagery, depth and mystery. A well composed poem!

A very short poem but attracts me illusively.....