Tuesday, November 6, 2018

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I had seen the fear of old,
His every tears was bright and bold.
He wAs fearing of a man who comes,
Man was not aged butt young ones.
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Shipra singh (ships)
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Dr Antony Theodore 21 February 2019

His luminiousness was going to decline, But his eyes was full of kin.. very expressive of the pain of the Old ones who lived for you and pointing to the indifference in the young ones. very fine poem. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Nisha 14 January 2019

Nice think

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Preeti singh 14 January 2019

Nice one

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 November 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Shipra singh. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 06 November 2018

Grandparents are the generation we look up to. A great poem.

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