Tuesday, October 13, 2015

Dying Villages (Revised Version) Comments

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Time has stood still in this village
where young voices no longer giggle.

Dogs bark, birds chirp, streams still trickle
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Susan Williams 03 September 2020

Perched on windiest plains of France, poet sat, surrounded by visions, whispers of the past. Watching sons, and daughter, gath'ring wild flowers,

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Susan Williams 03 September 2020

Strong lines invoking strong emotions even this far in time we are now from ww1 and ww2- - -but man continues to make war so we will not be out of graveyards to visit and ponder the death of young men and wonder yet again when will we learn

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Panmelys Panmelys 13 October 2015

typo error farmers not famers; sorry Panmelys

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