Thursday, July 25, 2019

Dying To Live Comments

Rating: 5.0

I will continue to live on
Without giving up to the moon
The ice is broken
The old tombs are filled with rickety worms
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Falana Zion
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D Loveday Morris 04 November 2023

'The odds of the past seems like a dot on the future sky'... Keep on living.

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Von Klassique 11 November 2021

Powerful and well written! ! 💡

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Diane Montemayor 11 August 2019

I love to live - powerful line.. Thanks

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Michael Hopkins 06 August 2019

A beautifully crafted poem. You are a poet sir.

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Uche Nwanze 01 August 2019

Please read my poems, especially ' When I am gone' and 'Lagos: A city that never sleeps'. Thanks

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Falana Zion 02 August 2019

Alright Nwamze, I'll check it out.

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Uche Nwanze 01 August 2019

Amazing, keep the fingers itchy to write more.

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Ramesh T A 29 July 2019

This guts is needed to survive, sustain and succeed ever in world life sure! Thanks for sharing you nice poem here!

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Alan Luty 29 July 2019

like it yes thoughtful and good poem

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Richard Wlodarski 29 July 2019

An inspirational write with powerful imagery.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 July 2019

An excellent write, Falana...10+++

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Bryony Sheldon 25 July 2019

Amazing and well written poem!

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Falana Zion

Falana Zion

Ekiti State, Nigeria
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