Friday, March 27, 2015

Dying To Die Comments

Rating: 4.9

Running from life
There
Seems to be, just no way out
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Lyn Paul
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Jak Black 22 April 2015

A great message in this well written piece, Lyn. A problem shared is a problem halved. I like it.

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Geetha Jayakumar 17 April 2015

Simply Beautiful flow of words, a light you can see even in darkness of night. Never give up the life - -is the beautiful and positive message conveyed through this poem. A Powerful write from your pen. Loved reading it.

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Hazel Durham 01 April 2015

Life is for living, but bad does happen to people and we all need to be there for one another to listen to their pain and give support to them when they feel so depressed. A poem full of hope as you shine a light in the darkness that is suicide. Beautiful write Lyn!

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Rajesh Thankappan 31 March 2015

Life is the gift of God and no living being, except man, thinks of committing suicide. You have very rightly pointed out that life's purpose is to explore and under whatever circumstance a man may be, he should not premediate death. A very beautiful poem exalting life.

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Smoky Hoss 31 March 2015

A poem of powerful hope, very well done.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 28 March 2015

Truly said, God has created man with a purpos to live on earth.Pain follows joy and joy follows pain.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 March 2015

Very nicely and aptly envisioned. A beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing. ........10

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