Dying So Young Comments

I'm so sorry for you and the poem is great, it might not rhyme but it was definately a rough time for you. keep writing please your writing is beautiful and i can relate with it. Lucy xx

that's so sad: (but very good, I was hanging on to every word and felt everything you were discribing

i love the emotion in the poem x

awwww this nearly made me cry there is never any loss of emotion in your poems x

So sad and full of emotion....felt what u were saying...great write SG

Such a sad story I think we all go thru this but not for so young a person it makes the heart heavy, written as it happened...regards

This is beautifully written, All i can say is - Elegant...everything has already been told in the story. I guarantee with no doubt that this will touch MANY MANY hearts...it always does.