Sunday, July 1, 2012

Dying Of Thirst Comments

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She sat beside me everyday for nearly two years riding that train.
Most of the time we only shared small talk between us. Once in awhile we'd bring up something with a little more substance to it,
like how she hated her job or how everyone told her she was just like her mother. Her mother had a problem with staying settled and could've been on The Montel Williams Show because they had moved so many times before. She wasn't married and she didn't want any kids of her own. Maybe one day she'd adopt a couple of kids and if so…it would be a girl then a boy
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Adeline Foster 31 August 2012

This is lovely prose and the narrative is very engrossing. I enjoyed it. Hopefully you will catch my – Briar Fever – Adeline

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