Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Dying Ma Comments

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All you have are in stock-still state
I can see you ma breathlessly lying flat
All bygone flashes are limited in mind
Now thy twin round black ball does not see me
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RUP POKHAREL
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Anju Addanki 16 September 2009

Rup this is a very heart touching poem and a very sensitive issue. Even though u r poem was good it was hard for me to accept it. but a nice work.

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Paul Hansford 11 September 2009

With the old-fashioned language, this comes across as a kind of prayer to the mother, which is quite appropriate. You might like to look at my 'Driving on Auto-pilot', about my own mother's death.

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Sushmita Moktan 16 August 2009

its true 'for God cannot be everywhere so he made mothers'....hearttouching..nice...

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RUP POKHAREL

RUP POKHAREL

Damphu, Bhutan
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