Tuesday, August 15, 2006

Dying Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lack of the pitter patter of my heart, that the mere thought of you brought on,
Now brings on shades of midnight blue, how can my love for you be gone,
Three little words once formed daily on my lips, would now catch in my throat,
It's slipping through my fingertips, I don't know why and I am losing hope,
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Vallerie Lobell
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Siddharth Singh 23 July 2009

When love dies, it takes away a lot with it. Very nicely written.

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Blue Eyes 08 July 2008

my eyes are full of tears i cannot believe my eyes and ears reading your poetry loud makes me of being human proud

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 May 2008

the dying love would be refresh when a new lease of breathe been reinstated.

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Harry Couchon Jr 06 May 2008

Valerie a beautiful piece about what happens when a love isn't nurtured and kept fresh and vibrant I have been on the receiving end of that poem yet I never gave up on love Harry

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Marvin Brato 09 November 2006

Beautifully written, true love when only one reamins steadfast becomes painful indeed. But the thought of having loved someone is already remarkable though. Thanks

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