Dying Love Comments

Distantly the amber glow of a lonely lighthouse seems to be fading further and further out of sight, .....is a beautiful expression. Even after the seagulls no longer cry, the lighthouse loses its shadow After the doves now replace the darkness, will I ever stop loving you...... No, never....you cannot.

love living sweet unto death... a write melodious and poetic...10

Bonnie, This could not have been penned any better, or more simply. Your poetic words are sheer perfection. Masterpiece and sheer beauty come to mind. This is a timeless golden expression... Best to you, Robert

how i wish i could live in a lighthouse together with you.

A very deep and smooth poem Bonnie. Thanks Tracker

A canvas of colour so richly painted in my mind's eye. Thanks for that Bonnie. Craig.

Another good poem you have written here Bonnie you do write from the heart, again well done

This a really beautiful poem Bonnie, your words paint a glorious picture. Andrew 10

A bitter sweet remembrance of once upon a time. The reader feels the savoring of the very last of something. Sad. Sad. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

wow...this is a powerful piece Bonnie. There is something devastating in being the one that always loves more than anyone you encounter...eventually it will always lead to heartache. You have a beautiful way with words...and I have enjoyed every piece I've read. Hope there'll be more soon.: o) Bj

You create some great imagery 'amber glow of a lonely lighthouse' is a beautiful line.