Monday, February 12, 2007

Dying In Public Comments

Rating: 5.0

She places a strategic
well placed kiss
on the back of my neck
injecting me with
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Ted Sheridan
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Robert Siney 24 October 2008

Interesting last line in this one. The subtext is delicately showered and I liked that. Your style intrigues me Ted.

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Dee Daffodil 12 February 2007

Ewwww...she sounds like a 'Black Widow'....yuck! ! Great poem though! ! Hugs, Dee

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