Dying For Life Comments

I love the title to this piece. I think it is brilliant.

I live each day as though it might e my last One day I am bound to be right

To live for life with out strife! Is there such a thing? I think it's tied around my neck and I drag it along with me, if I stop for just a second it catches up to me. haha but then it's better then the alternative to life isn't it? A great write. I like the structure of this poem.

What more could one ask for, a life without strife, nice poem George, 10 Lynda xx