Friday, October 24, 2008

Dying For Life Comments

Rating: 4.2

To rest in peace
I live on
To be the best of the rest.
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George BernardBloodyShaw
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Stacey Watts 08 November 2008

I love the title to this piece. I think it is brilliant.

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Ivor Hogg 05 November 2008

I live each day as though it might e my last One day I am bound to be right

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Tj Becker 26 October 2008

To live for life with out strife! Is there such a thing? I think it's tied around my neck and I drag it along with me, if I stop for just a second it catches up to me. haha but then it's better then the alternative to life isn't it? A great write. I like the structure of this poem.

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Lynda Robson 24 October 2008

What more could one ask for, a life without strife, nice poem George, 10 Lynda xx

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