Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Saturday, December 14, 2019

Dying For A Cookie Comments

Rating: 5.0

On his deathbed lay poor old Jim,
hardly any strength left to him,
and he was thinking as he lay:
"I'll just lie here and die today, "
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Kim Barney
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This is absolutely hilarious! I laughed until my ribs hurt! To MyPoemList and five stars!

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Bri Edwards 28 December 2019

I think Hazel's comment seemed " generous" to you BECAUSE she exaggerated to make you feel even better than you already were feeling, Old Guy! ! but, alas, i admit that i too laughed, but not TOO loudly, at the ending. Actually the whole poem deserves to go to MyPoemList. Poor f+king husband. Then again, lucky to be rid of his wife soon. What a witch! ! they look like Toll House Ch. Chip Cookies my ma made, with my help, i think. i KNOW i helped eat them. bri :)

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Hazel Durham 15 December 2019

I laughed out loud....great ending...brilliant!

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Kim Barney 15 December 2019

Thank you so much for this generous comment, Hazel!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 December 2019

A humorous write, sir Kim. Congrats on your simultaneous wins....10+++

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Kim Barney 15 December 2019

Thank you, Bernard. It was very surprising to take first, second and third!

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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