Dying Embers Comments
I’m forgetting your face and your smile,
I try to recall the shape of your eyes.
You appear in my mind for a while,
But you fade away, everything dies.
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This is lovely, Yolanta. Great ABAB rhyming, and beautiful emotive language... Oh! The longing for a love lost... how inspired the muses become with this sad emotion! I enjoyed this very much... especially the final two lines... 'I'll bend over dying embers to revive / the fading flame and my memories of you...' This is a beautiful metaphor. Sunshine from South Africa, Lana
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7/28/2025 11:05:08 PM # 1.0.0
They say, 'out of sight, out of mind.' How true. Absence can make the heart grow fonder, and the memory dimmer. I like this poem! I give you 10!