Dying Beast Comments

This thing is about dreams I like to dream

Noting the last glance Of agonized eye At passing wind And boundless sky. Expressive of the inner struggle. tony

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The prey and the preying bird. The food and the hungry. Death and the agony. Great piece, message, metaphor and allegory

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Speaking of passing wind.....oh, that's a relief!

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premonition of the poet

Out standing flight of imagery has made this medoly an outstanding classical poem.

I am sorry, the grammar is a problem and give me a bad note and a slap me in the face." Noting the last glance of an agonized eye at the passing wind and boundless sky" is better. Otherwise it is a touchingly profound feeling being described.

Noting the last glance Of agonized eye At passing wind And boundless sky.........touching expression. Beautiful poem by Langston Hughes.

With no regrets, Head held higher, Counting every second, Desiring no Perfection but completeness.

A sad end of a once fellow creature.

the boundless sky and the passing wind. great. tony

Noting the last glance Of agonized eye...//// great expression on the end of life

Excellent! A deserving poem of day!

Helpless now the dying beast has nothing. Lucky buzzards. Life's cycle.

Marvelous poem! One of the best!