Saturday, March 22, 2014

Dying Angel Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lonely Angel sits and begins to weep,
Sad and afraid feeling beyond weak.
Tears from fears fall from her eyes,
All she knows is her disguise.
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Chinedu Dike 18 February 2018

Heartfelt sad tale told in eloquent finesse. Insightful narrative embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing.

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V P Mahur 22 March 2014

Dear Angel, Lovely poem with deep gloomy thoughts. I think this is your first poem here. Keep it up. Congratulations and welcome to this world of poets. regularly check your inbox and 'Manage your comments' page. Thanks! 'Truth of Creation' ........................ ......................

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Thomas Duncky 22 March 2014

This one really sounds like those from the heart. Nice flow of rhythm and clever choice of words. Great piece.

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