'Dying And Living-Cost Free' Comments

‘…# Mental dieting // To trim - // Desiring…’ Too much of gluttony leads to…poet has nicely described… Like a blow to consumerist world…

‘# No rest…! No place To rest! ‘ Best lines. Because we’ve en-trapped us [willfully] in the net of uncontrolled gratification. Ten++ PO PO

excellent write dr sakti shows life as it presenly is 10

hi dr. in this poem u use the words that are precise, accurate, and exact about the greeders. i really like it. and the punishment is mortal. i think i am one of that greeders who has bulimia yes i must be very mcuh carefull ! ! ! ! ! ! ! and think this work deserves 10 points! ! ! ! me from thailnad

Great poem about a good subject