Friday, March 14, 2008

Dying Alone In The Night Comments

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Here I am, lying in the road,
What is happening, what is going on,
Why I see fire to the right,
I hear sirens far off, coming closer,
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Kayla Duf
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Greenwolfe 1962 30 March 2008

This is a very creative piece. I like the way you structured the ending. It was a bit surprising and that doesn't happen often. A fine job young lady. GW62

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